Run On Sentences
Definition:
Run-on sentences result from completely omitting
punctuation between sentences.
There are four ways how to improve the run-on
sentences
1. By making the run-on sentences into several simple
sentences.
The choice
of a camera is difficult. They are many good kinds on the market.
2. By making the run-on sentences into a compound
sentence using.
a. a semicolon
The choice
of a camera is difficult there are many good kinds on the market.
The choice
of a camera is difficult; the are
many good kinds on the market.
b. a conjunction (and, but, yet, so, for, or, nor)
The choice
of a camera is difficult there are many good kinds on the market.
The choice
of a camera is difficult, for there
are many good kinds on the market.
c. a sentences connector (moreover, however, neverthless,
in contrast, etc.)
The choice
of a camera is difficult there are many good kinds on the market.
The choice
of a camera is difficult, beside,
there are many good kinds on the market.
3. By making run-on sentences into a complex sentence
using.
a. an adverbial clause (using subordinators: because,
when, as, since, after, etc.)
The choice
of a camera is difficult there are many good kinds on the market.
The choice
of a camera is difficult because
there are many good kinds on the market.
b. an adjective clause (using relative pronoun: who,
which, that, whom, etc.)
My sister
has a lot of money can buy anything she wants.
My sister who has a lot of money can buy anything
she wants.
c. a noun clause
My sister
has a lot of money can buy anything she wants.
Who has a lot of money can buy anything
she wants.
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